envious thoughts aside.
âWeâll move on,â Cherryfall decided. âWeâve probablyscared all the prey away around here.â
Alderpaw felt his paws growing heavier with every paw step as he followed the mentors. I just know Iâm going to mess up. His belly was churning by the time they halted beside a small pool, with bushes and long grass growing around its edge.
âWe should find something here,â Molewhisker meowed. âOkay, both of you, show me the hunterâs crouch.â
Alderpaw squatted beside his sister, his pelt prickling with anxiety as both mentors padded around them, observing them closely.
âGood, Sparkpaw,â Cherryfall mewed. âBut keep your tail a bit closer.â
âAnd Alderpaw, tuck your paws in a bit more,â Molewhisker added.
âYes, you canât have your hindpaws sticking out if you want a good pounce,â Sparkpaw put in.
I know that, Alderpaw thought, giving her a glare.
âAnd you have to be really, really quick,â Sparkpaw went on. âYour prey wonât wait around for you. And your clawsââ
âSparkpaw, knock it off.â Molewhiskerâs tone was irritable. âYouâre not the mentor here. Youâre a brand-new apprentice, just like Alderpaw.â
Sparkpaw flattened her ears, then nodded reluctantly, while Alderpaw gave his mentor a grateful look. Molewhisker responded by brushing his tail over Alderpawâs shoulders.
âRemember what we told you about keeping low,â Cherryfall continued. âAnd watch where youâre putting your paws.The snap of a twig, the wave of a fern frond, and your preyâs gone.â
Alderpaw nodded, trying to take in all the information. Then the moment he had dreaded finally arrived.
âNow, Alderpaw,â Molewhisker meowed. âSee if you can find some prey.â
Alderpaw narrowed his eyes and concentrated, tasting the air. The scents here werenât quite so complicated, and he soon pinpointed a vole underneath a bush close to the water.
âThereâs a vole under there,â he murmured to Molewhisker, angling his ears toward the bush.
Molewhisker gave him an approving nod. âGood. Go after it, then.â
Alderpaw adjusted his crouch and began to creep forward, then hesitated. Is the vole really under that bush, or in the clump of long grass just beside it? Should I go straight for it, or loop around the grass so it canât see me coming?
âWhatâs the matter?â Molewhisker hissed impatiently. âGo!â
Alderpaw was frozen with indecision. I have to get this right, but I donât know how!
While he was still hesitating, unable to move, the vole suddenly scampered out of the depths of the bush, plopped into the water, and vanished.
âMouse-brain!â Sparkpaw exclaimed.
I probably deserve that, Alderpaw admitted to himself. He hung his head in shame as Molewhisker padded up to him. âA good hunter doesnât hesitate,â his mentor meowed. âYou needto trust your instincts.â Then he relaxed a little and touched Alderpaw on the shoulder with his tail. âNever mind. Thereâll be other prey.â
His mentorâs kindness only made Alderpaw feel more ashamed. Iâve let Molewhisker down.
Sparkpaw suddenly darted off into the bushes, and Alderpaw looked up, startled. She emerged a moment later, swinging the body of a plump mouse by its tail.
âSparkpaw, thatâs amazing!â Cherryfallâs eyes were sparkling with delight. âYouâre going to be a great hunter.â
âYeah, good catch,â Molewhisker muttered, his tail-tip twitching in annoyance.
Iâve let him down again, Alderpaw thought wretchedly. I wanted so much to make him proud of me!
Cherryfall picked up Sparkpawâs shrew and led the way as the cats headed back toward camp. Alderpaw trudged along with his head down, feeling more miserable and disgraced with