without it.
As he sat pondering this, Aunty Mary emerged from the kitchen with a cup of tea.
âI thought you might like this since you are working.â
He turned and sighed. His auntâs attentions embarrassed himâthe cooking, the laundry, the cups of tea. He planned to move out, of course. Buy a house closer to the city, ship his belongings from Canada. But for now, for Aunty Mary, he was still a child. He took the cup and thanked her.
âHow are your pupils doing?â she said.
âOh, most of them are fine.â He paused. âI just finished reading the new kidâs essay. Seems he supports the Tigers.â
âAiyo.â Aunty shook her head. âThese Tigers only care about making trouble. You must explain to him.â
Rudy looked down at the half-page on which his comments would be written. âThereâs nothing I can explain to him that he does-nât already know, Aunty. He believes that violence is the only option left for his cause.â
Aunty frowned. âAnd why is a young man so worried about a cause like this? He has more important things to think about, no?â
Feeling oddly compelled to defend his student, Rudy shrugged and sipped his tea. âKanda identifies himself mainly as a Tamil. He thinks his language and culture will be best served in an independent country.â
âHe is full of strange ideas then,â Aunty said. âWhatâs most important is our family, no? We should worry about those people, whether they are healthy and living a good life. Language and culture will look after themselves, isnât it.â
Rudy opened his mouth then shrugged again. âYou may be right.â
âDo you think this Kanda is involved with the Tigers?â
âI doubt it. But who knows? The Tigers employ kids a hell of a lot younger than him.â
âAh, yes.â Aunty shook her head. âThey give machine guns to children. Itâs a sin.â
Rudy gulped down most of his tea and stared at the back page of Kandaâs essay. In the brief silence, the ticking of Grandpaâs old clock and the thrum of the electric fan were strangely loud.
Then Aunty sighed. âI think our government is putting itself out on the murunga branch.â
Rudy looked up, surprised. His aunt never discussed politics. âWhat do you mean?â
âAh, itâs an old expression. When someone is feeling very proud of himself, we say he is sitting on the murunga branch.â She pulled a handkerchief from the pocket of her dress and shook it out. âAs you know, the murunga is a very tall tree. It also has very brittle branches. You can climb high up in this tree, but then the branch breaks ...â Her voice trailed off.
âAnd how does that relate to the government?â
Aunty wiped her forehead and cheekbones. âThe government is feeling very proud these days. They believe that capturing Jaffna will put an end to all this fighting. But I think these Tigers will make sure the armyâs murunga branch comes crashing back to the ground.â
âYou and Kanda agree on that much,â he said with a wry smile. âAnd Dad. What does he say? âThe Tamil man and the Sinhalese man will never get along. Itâs not in their nature.â Or some rubbish like that?â
His aunt stuffed the handkerchief back in her pocket. âAh, no. Youâre right. We must be positive, isnât it. Itâs Easter.â And on that, she turned and went back to the kitchen.
Rudy picked up his pen and composed his comments.
Kanda: Your essay is quite well organized and the prose is clear and engaging. There are some problems with grammar and punctuation, as marked, but they donât seriously detract from the success of your paper. The essay has a strong, attention-grabbing thesis, and you offer plenty of good evidence in support of it. The major way in which the paper could be improved would be to give some
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